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« on: June 21, 2008, 02:51:55 AM »

METAL PARADISE! <-- link

so my friend mercury is writing this story and i can see that he is kinda sad that all his hard work is not really getting read by a lot of ppl...so i decided to tell u guys about it here!

i put this here since this is where we r putting our "other manga" threads since there is no place for those...this is good enough

and even tho this story has no pictures, it is phrased like a manga(or more like subs of an anime) and it reminds me of an anime if it were put into animation...

so check it out everyone and vote to tell me how it is so i can tell him...

and its not done yet so he will be updating it so that there will actually be more than u see here.

DO NOT be impatient with the page b/c he uses background music in some of the parts so that has to load and there is a lot of txt so the page gets really long, adding to the lag the page may bring...but its WELL WORTH IT

and it's a pretty long story(book length...sorta)
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« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2008, 01:05:46 AM »

yea i totally like this story ^^ well it's was kinda long :/ but i made it some how XD i think he should write more ^^
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« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2008, 04:02:27 PM »

yea i totally like this story ^^ well it's was kinda long :/ but i made it some how XD i think he should write more ^^

he's not done yet...he's gonna go until book 2 chapter 4 for Metal Paradise...idk how much he might do for the sequel he might make...
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« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2008, 08:07:40 PM »

on my desktop it shows only titles for the 1st 2 chapters after that nun...is gud thoe i like it
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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2008, 09:23:16 PM »

on my desktop it shows only titles for the 1st 2 chapters after that nun...is gud thoe i like it


u might have to go to the next page of the thread...

at the top or the bottom there should be something like this:

(1) 2 3 4 ... 9 »

and u click the page # to go to that page
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« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2008, 11:09:16 PM »

well i didnt finish it 2day...2many interuptions..buh 2maro

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« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2008, 12:00:05 PM »

has anyone read this yet? any part of it? the whole thing so far?

come on ppl its good! it just doesnt have pictures...sorry kids Undecided
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« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2008, 02:00:06 PM »

I want pictures... hmmph. (stomp foot)
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« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2008, 02:04:40 PM »

its got music that goes with it tho! it builds the feeling of the moment
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« Reply #9 on: July 10, 2008, 07:32:28 PM »

Is he creating a manga or is it already done? I would like to be part of the art work.
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« Reply #10 on: July 10, 2008, 09:46:17 PM »

he just wrote a story...there r no pictures except for the fan made ones...
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« Reply #11 on: July 10, 2008, 11:50:14 PM »

Is he planning to make it a manga or something cuz i would like to help.
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« Reply #12 on: July 11, 2008, 01:19:33 PM »

hmm...i'm not sure since he is planning to write a sequel series and i dont know if he can draw. i think if u want to help u may be the only one drawing...

i will ask him if he wants to have it manga-fied
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« Reply #13 on: July 15, 2008, 10:06:02 PM »

i read it......its really gud..the way the separate plots are setup up and come together at thier own pace of time is really gud...he shud go pro or try
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« Reply #14 on: July 15, 2008, 10:07:50 PM »

u read teh WHOLE thing?

all the way up to Book II Chapter III?
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